I've always loved the power of death(In fiction), erasing the existance of a person, no longer there, gone forever(For a certain belief) never coming back, I love it, the hurt in a person heart, of the experience of there love with someone, which can be romantic, friendly, or something crazy, It all feels silent to me, when death happens, no more yelling, no more anger, except for the person who missed that person, like Sly, he wanted revenge on Clockwerk, he wanted to kill him for killing his parents, having no mercy.
There is even sometimes major development in a character once it happens, making them mentally stronger all over, and pulling through, better than ever.
I honestly get bored when so many characters live, fictional stories tried to make there stories like Heaven, with incredibly dark secrets, that we do not know about.
I am not really a subtle writer Steam, im not like Kishimoto, Kentaro Miura, or the most subtle writer ever known.
Im just not like them, I say what my story is, and I know that Im doing it, Although I have managed to keep secrets before
Back to the major topic, the ideal of Death, is truely the greatest power of all, meaning no more, we must move on, through this, Sly has faced this before, and Jojo has faced this, knowing his brother better than his nephew, even still by the grudges Jojo holds, losing his older brother, was something he did not want for his rival brother.
However there is some characters, that I don't think I can kill.
I can't kill Jojo, I just can't, no matter how hard I try to make him a corrupted villain, I can't kill him.
He maybe the only character that I cannot kill.(Except Sly)
Darn him, cursed evil raccoon, curse you Jojo!, You 6'2 ft Raccoon!
But as for everyone else(Except Sly and Jojo), I would find other character death interesting.
Im not if I am going to kill any of the Sly gang members , unless if my villain Jojo surpasses my intelligence, which would ultimatly lead them to there death, if that happens, but to be honest I don't for sure If I'll do that, however I did have an awful idea of what should happen to one of them.
But in the prequel by my ideas, it seems as if Teodoro has the upper hand, he has it so much, that Im worried of what might happen to the other characters.
Richard(I had to change this guy's name 3 times, 3 times! Can you believe it!?)
Heck, I hated the fact that he and Nim-won(Mostly Teodoro) outsmarted me, giving me no way out(As far I can think of) to spare Alex and Walkira life.
I felt so bad doing that but if I didn't do it, that would give a bad impression to king of lighting and make Teo look lazy and too forgiving of a villain(unless if you count Jojo, to a very certain extend, but that's a big stretch)
I don't want Jojo to end up like Obito.
I wanted Alex and Walkira to live but I knew I would have to A-pull, maybe bring inconsistancy to Teo's character and making him look dumb.
If it was Le Paradox then they would live but that guy isn't even born in this time period(unless if he did some travel there)
and If he was the villain then this story would most likely be very anti-climatic, because that wouldn't be a very good challenge for the Cooper brothers or as a villian, that's more for comedy purposes like Drakken from Kim Possible(Man, that guy fails so horriably that it's almost not even funny, almost)
But anyway back to Teodoro, he's supposed to be unmerciful and intelligent whom is urged to accomplish his goals.
But he's only just the beginning.
Remember it depends or it should depend on how dangerious the villain is.
This isn't DBZ or One piece where the villains just keep beating up the hero, by the hero winning at the end.
I can't pull a Naruto 688 on this, that's rule breaking for stories.
And not that much different to vandel either.
That's just cliche and unrealistict(Please don't get on to me for using realistic and unrealstic on the Sly Cooper fan fic wiki, please I am begging you) I've already encountered way too angryly by other people.
B.Something horriable has happened to them.
And Im not sure if I should add escape but I did use it in Ch.0, well to be honest, that wasn't really an escape as Julia said, Teodoro wasn't really trying.
I also realised in most writing when it comes to the villain or hero getting there butts kicked, somebody saves them.
Im not sure if this is cliche, it may depend on how it is done, but it is something that bothors me.
Well I guess that's all I have to say, but last but not least.
Jojo and Julia, Foreves!
Teodoro can have leeches all over him for all I care, he doesn't love her, he just think's she's attractive and cute looking.
He's such a scum!
And dang it, now im thinking that Todd Habercorn should play as Jojo.
Sigh* I just can't make up my mind for the voicing of Jojo.
Mark Hamil, todd, Steven and that guy voiced the penquin in Spyro 3.
well to get things started off, I well start with Quotes
(France-1916, Verdun battlefield, WW1)
(A French Runner(messager)(Rabbit) is running though the Trenches In the middle of a Artillery attack)
(A few Shells almost kill him)(Ducks into a Pillbox)(meets a Soldier hunkering down in there as well listening to a phonograph(music))
(The Newspaper reader looks at the Hair):pleuvoir le plomb Hein?(raining lead Eh?)
Runner: pas vraiment, il ne peut pas être-(no... really, it can't be-)
???:Fermez votre soldat de visage!! (Shut your face trooper)
(Runner looks Over to see a pretty Female Officer): euh ... madame? (uh...madam?)
Female Officer(Ferret): quoi? vous n'avez jamais vu une femme dans l'armée? (what? you never seen a woman in the army?)
Runner:Non, madame, papa m'a dit que la guerre n'est pas un endroit pour une femme-(no madam, dad told me that war is no place for a woman-)
Officer(slams her fist on her desk):à l'enfer ce qu'il dit! Sortez de là, vous idiot! Ça vous apprendra les bonnes manières!(to hell what he says! Get out of here you idiot! That will teach you some manners!)
(The Runner *Glups* and start making another mad dash in the lead storm)
news paper reader: était que madame vraiment nécessaire?(was that really needed madam?)
Officer:(grins)HA, Oui, il était. (Yes, it was)
(Africa - Boer wars)
British Officer rallying his troops: WE Got 5 æronefs, we got 2 land Ironclads, we even got a ruddy Rail cannon, WHAT DO THE FUZZY BOERS HAVE!?
A British soldier point over a mountain top: That
[This plays] (The British officer slowly Turns around to see massive Spyder tanks coming down a hill with the boer flag on them follow by a Massive Walking ship)
Oh well, I guess thats life, but the two things I hated about the crash and spyro, is that Ted Price said Spyro doesn't have hands, so he couldn't lift up a gun, and Gexup just kept bragging about how much better Jak and Ratchet are in comparison.
I will admit this, they have worked harder for these games more than what they did with Crash and Spyro, but you can't ignore the lovable simple magic that those mascots, something that Jak and Ratchet don't have.
Well Jak had it by the first one, but not exactly by its sequels.
well, It ain't that complex compair to my earier works, But it not a level one reader either
Anyway, This page is spitted into three Ch.
Ch1 Deals with A basic Run though, Slight complex but well make sences in the next Ch.
Talks about a little bit about Whats going on. But in a way that shows no one but Suzanne is really knowning what Going on and that she messed with everyones minds
Ch2 Deals with memories of Suzanne and a few other people. and goes into the back deeper into the Backstories of the gaslight world and the future loop foundation. This well help readers to understand The What ACTULLAY going on better then CH1.
CH3 Talk about the said Heist going on, And where we learn of Suzanne Crazy, Actually, plot, and how it not going to plan. and later on in the chapter, We also find out that Suzanne was actually looking for clipper plate to warp the "submarine"(We also find out that it not a Submarine) into the gaslight time with the cooper gang onboard.
Yeah, I know I have alot of depression at my place, but I can't help it, Ive always been like this from the day I was born, I was an abused child when I was kid to Teen, you can't expect me to be perfect.
Why I think Sly Cooper:Thieves in time is fanfiction.
He said that Sly was not a fighter, he is a thief, you can clearly see that Fredrick, Conner and Jojo, useing fighting alot.
As for Sly Sly and the gang, the progression of down an enemy, takes alot of patience.
The Cooper Brothers are more of a mix, using the skills of there previous ancestors to get what they want, and the Coopers knowledge of combat to finish there enemys.
Sly focused more thievery more than the other important statistics of defeating his enemys, of which he usually realies on his gang.
The way of the Cooper brothers, is more agressive, it is true that they need each other to get what they want, but they also don't want to completly depend on eachother.
For example lets say every single member in Slys gang is dead except Sly Cooper, how in the world is he going to take down his enemys, if he highly depends on his team throughout almost every mission.
Now for Jojos case in this, of a what if he replace Sly Cooper, being the leader of the gang.
Everyone is dead, except Jojo, but the difference here is that Jojo can have a much higher advantage to beat his enemy than Sly due to the fact that he didn't just focus on thievery, he was making a combination out of himself.
Conner was the only one of the Coopers that knew how to beat him, because he knew him best, he is his little brother after all, but Conner is dead, and Jojo is still alive.
However the Coopers didn't do this out of thin air, they got this idea of doing surviving alone from people of whom I will not say.
The reason why I wanted to tell you this, is because Im afraid that people are gonna critisize this, like crazy, but that doesn't mean Im gonna make Sly and the gang like this, just these guys.
So is this a flaw in a thiefs greed or something different?
...first you go about saying is Sly a theif or fight? then state if anyone esle a fighters. The ask ... on and on and on-
Spy, get to the point, What is it your asking?
If it about being aftraid it going to get Criticized, then you should just stop your writing carrer, because no MATTER WHAT you do, everything is going to get Criticized at least once.
Heck, there one attention hound that Criticized Das boot! Another few Criticizing the Lego movie!
If you can't take getting Criticize, You should stop. There going to be atleast one hater out there. Soul, I can tell you, didn't gived a damn for all I try to help her with. She planly doesn't like steampunk and almost removed ever bit out of her game. Do I care? NO!
spy, I havn't even fully told you how this game works, and already you think it works like pokemon (which I never played a game in my life). How do you think I'm feeling right now with you thinking that my game works like pokemon?